Re: C'mon, Give Me Good Water

["Schrade, Scott" <sschrade@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

> A few from White City:
> "I hear the waterfall of women weeping" - Hiding Out (I assume that 
> crying reference is OK, Scott?)

OK?  It's spectacular!  Look at the alliteration, too!  All the words
Pete chose that start with "W."  Waterfall.  Women.  Weeping.  *That,*
my friends, is top-notch lyrical writing!  

> "I can stand here, look out on an ocean" - I Am Secure
> "His pride is like an ocean - Encircled by a reef" - Come to Mama

The water image is extremely important in WHITE CITY, isn't it?
Great examples, Jim!


- SCHRADE in Akron